Response to: A Flight I'll Never Forget (unit 1 assignment)

Source: http://writeherewritenow-beth.blogspot.com/2010/08/flight-ill-never-forget-unit-1.html

Wow, what an experience this must have been for all of the passengers on board. I’m sure that everyone was thinking that they were not going to see their family again. I myself hate flying and a story like this just reassures my feelings towards it. I agree with Sarah Lindhe, I liked the way you captured our attention right off the bat and think that you did a great job explaining how this incident went down, no pun intended. The thing that concerns me the most is the lack of communication on the part of the crew. How can you just say that this incident was an error? It seems like their should be a lot better communication going on especially when you are dealing with all those people’s lives. You did a great job capturing the fear that these poor people must have endured.